Monday, October 30, 2023

On the Run

 
He fell to one knee as he came through the Gate. The nausea was worse than ever and it took a moment to catch his breath. He looked around and to his left was water, as far as the eye could see. The booming of the surf was at least familiar, and the sky looked more or less the right shade. To the right was jungle, a riotous profusion of sound and color. Tropical, he thought with a smile. You always could pick 'em, Anna

So, first things first. He checked his weapon, wincing at the charge on his pulse rifle, and checked his other stuff. Everything seemed in order. He scanned the area, carefully looking for any sign of movement or hostiles but could see nothing other than various birds. He looked back at the Gate and saw that it was quiet now, maybe inert. Thank you, he mouthed to anyone who was listening, and then sat down with his back to it, exhausted. He felt like shit. 

Later he stirred- had he fallen asleep?- and noticed the day seemed to have moved on. He was sore but otherwise feeling better, so he got to his feet with a grimace and started moving. The jungle was the same everywhere he looked, and the beach he was on seemed to be a sheltered cove, he could see the headland forming a sort half moon. Cozy. He skirted the jungle for a bit, looking for any sign, but there was nothing. Then he saw it. Something sticking up from the sand. Was it... yes! A proximity alarm. Hope flared in his chest- it had to be Anna! Who else? The beacon had brought him here, to this place... it had to be her.  

As he approached and looked it over he could now see two others, half hidden by foliage. So someone clearly wanted to know if anyone came through the Gate. No doubt the alarm had already gone off, somewhere. Was there a base here? Heart racing, he plunged into the trees and thought about calling out, but decided against it. Not a smart thing to do. He wouldn't go far, but he needed to know if she was close. The day was hot and insects were everywhere, he had to swat them out of his eyes. With all the thrashing he was doing she would probably hear him coming a mile away. 

The ground began to rise and the trees thinned, and he quickened his pace. There were some heights ahead and he hoped he was going the right way. He could see something else now, as well. They looked like towers, in the distance, over the treetops. Strange though- they had a different shape, almost domed at the top. Hard to tell for sure though in the haze. He turned in that direction, wondering exactly where this was. What planet was he on? He went a little farther, trying to decide if he should go back, let her come to him, and was just about to turn back when he came into a cleared area. It had clearly been carved out of the surrounding jungle, and he immediately knew what it was. So there was a remote base here after all. 

No sign of activity, all was quiet. He was scouting the area with his eyes, from the treeline, when he saw someone in the entryway. Quiet and partially in shadow. Probably watching him. He hadn't exactly been quiet. He squinted, trying to get a better look. Was it her? He decided on the direct approach. Slinging his rifle over his shoulder, he came out of the trees slowly, hands up. He could see that whoever it was, they were armed. The weapon was definitely pointed at him. He swallowed and kept on. Somehow he knew. As he approached the weapon lowered, and he heard an intake of breath. Then she came to meet him. 

Anna.

15 comments:

  1. So much suspense. The writing is gripping my attention

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  2. Oh, at least it wasn't someone that was going to shoot him.

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  3. Yay...they met up again. Love this one. :D

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  4. Uy lo dejaste muy interesante. Te mando un beso.

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  5. Very intriguing. Great atmosphere for the suspense leaving us to want more. Awesome read.<<<<<<<<>>>>>>> in the 40s here I think it will warm up nicely today. Now if I could just sleep.

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    1. SNOW! Wow. Hope it's a good one. Not here...it made it to the 60s today.

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    2. Sun is bright on the way across TX

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    3. Hope the snow isn't to bad. I hope it is inspiring you with your on the run series. I will admit I need chapstick bad. Always something..those truckers are billing each other this morning on our drive back. All the best to your writing and adventures🐾♥️🦊

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    4. YEAH! I'm home. Just in time for the writer's group at our library to discuss the Nano Novel. I don't really want to do it. As many times as I have pulled it off..it always feels like crap afterwards. But if it can inspire..hmmmm...The people I liked in the group are not in this one. I miss a couple..actually one. I wish we would have just exchanged e-mails back then, but we didn't.
      Hope you guys are doing OK..a balmy 60 here, but 48 degrees in my old house..sooo...the heater is on. Believe me I have had one too many cold nights in the camper.

      Keep writing..have lots of fun with these characters..I'll be waiting!

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    5. Oh..I'm exhausted. We did have a good writer's group show up..still, I dunno if I like the idea of meeting like once a week this month. We have one real go-getter who writes dark fantasy..and I think she will want us to meet constantly. I like just staying in touch online, actually..we will see how long this last. I'm just not even gonna think about writing a novel for Nanowrimo. I can usually do it, but it really is a bunch a crap..i feel meeting the word count and all. Of course, I had a few funny experiences I had to share about writing. Maybe that's the content I should be writing..I dunno..Well, I am glad the snow didn't stick around long. Hope you are staying inspired. Keep Going!

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  6. I have missed the earlier installments, but this one really hooked me on its own. What is this Gate!?!

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  7. What a romantic date LOL. This was very atmospheric!

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  8. I have SO many to catch up on now. ^tries to read all^¨

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