tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post726745337094355556..comments2024-03-27T15:53:51.141-07:00Comments on Book Haven : Trust Issues - A Flash FictionGreghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-3956514186554709092016-04-29T12:50:05.865-07:002016-04-29T12:50:05.865-07:00That was great Greg, I love that image and your wo...That was great Greg, I love that image and your words go perfectly with it.Heather @ Random Redheaded Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10687310913717863161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-16212911706361395112016-04-16T21:28:34.393-07:002016-04-16T21:28:34.393-07:00O..M...G O LOOOVED IT!! I really like the line &qu...O..M...G O LOOOVED IT!! I really like the line "If he wasn't careful he would lose his shit for this girl. Too late." I liked the writing very much. The voice and the pacing. Great job Gregg! Can't wait for part 2 Daniela Ark @ BOOKIVERSE (www.danielaark.com)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15777377723072645220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-56901589077602019122016-04-05T10:39:24.248-07:002016-04-05T10:39:24.248-07:00Wattpad is super easy to set up, so you have no ex...Wattpad is super easy to set up, so you have no excuse!La La in the Libraryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18253014225202985934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-67191656826051420722016-04-05T10:00:33.417-07:002016-04-05T10:00:33.417-07:00Thank you! I was so inspired by the picture- I tho...Thank you! I was so inspired by the picture- I thought there has to be a story there somewhere. :) Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-71341981377677634892016-04-05T09:59:47.210-07:002016-04-05T09:59:47.210-07:00Thank you! I'm kinda curious myself now that I...Thank you! I'm kinda curious myself now that I mention it ha ha. The betrayal wasn't the original idea but it added conflict... :) Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-7158123896087180152016-04-05T09:58:51.587-07:002016-04-05T09:58:51.587-07:00I love that futuristic artwork too- so imagination...I love that futuristic artwork too- so imagination inspiring. I like the idea of continuing, and thanks for showing interest. :) I might explore it further, I'm curious myself now! Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-35931665791685186722016-04-05T09:57:26.690-07:002016-04-05T09:57:26.690-07:00Thanks Melissa! I had fun writing it... Thanks Melissa! I had fun writing it... Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-29519675144078962902016-04-05T09:57:07.117-07:002016-04-05T09:57:07.117-07:00Thank you! I appreciate your reading it- and I'...Thank you! I appreciate your reading it- and I'm kinda curious myself!Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-13699123945396997102016-04-05T09:56:33.643-07:002016-04-05T09:56:33.643-07:00Thank you! I'm kinda wondering myself...Thank you! I'm kinda wondering myself... Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-82917620589696047272016-04-05T09:56:10.445-07:002016-04-05T09:56:10.445-07:00I have not heard of that group, but it's good ...I have not heard of that group, but it's good to know! I am thinking of having another go at it. :) And I need to get on Wattpad! Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-89502835214788228932016-04-05T09:55:18.427-07:002016-04-05T09:55:18.427-07:00Thanks Molly! I enjoyed it a lot, it really took o...Thanks Molly! I enjoyed it a lot, it really took off once I started. :) Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-72713474460078269302016-04-05T09:54:46.250-07:002016-04-05T09:54:46.250-07:00Thanks Kristin! I enjoyed writing it... and I kind...Thanks Kristin! I enjoyed writing it... and I kinda liked leaving it open ended too. :) Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-31047069498279608192016-04-04T20:54:09.562-07:002016-04-04T20:54:09.562-07:00This captured me. I want to know who he is/what he...This captured me. I want to know who he is/what he does. Bummer on the betrayal but the emotion was portrayed so well. How nice that the art inspired that good bit of fiction. Martha Eskuchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14403539348594584733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-69658802356781336782016-04-03T09:13:01.823-07:002016-04-03T09:13:01.823-07:00Very good! I love that you included artwork, defin...Very good! I love that you included artwork, definitely gives a good visual in my head for the scene! Looking forward to any more you include in his story!<br /><br />Molly @ <a href="http://www.mollysbooknook.com" rel="nofollow">Molly's Book Nook</a>Molly's Book Nookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08346751934349831416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-10066246466509733302016-04-03T07:10:11.211-07:002016-04-03T07:10:11.211-07:00Oh my gosh, how good! I love that artwork shown ab...Oh my gosh, how good! I love that artwork shown above; I could stare at that for a long time, taking in the details. So that's it then, for flash fiction? We are left hanging off the cliff, lol! I want to know what happens after that. Do they meet up again? Is someone after him and will they get him? Maybe you should continue the story and make it a novella-length :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-65296444361290770162016-04-03T06:14:57.181-07:002016-04-03T06:14:57.181-07:00Enjoyed this! You should make this a regular featu...Enjoyed this! You should make this a regular feature. A friend of mine writes a lot of Flash Fiction. I guess there is as group of them on this site called Zoetrope. Have you ever heard if it? I guess it is in the same vein as Wattpad. He keeps asking me to join, but I don't think he gets that I write Middle Grade stuff. Ha ha. You should look into it if you haven't already. :)La La in the Libraryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18253014225202985934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-51627690953170305572016-04-03T05:24:21.354-07:002016-04-03T05:24:21.354-07:00Awesome... perfect length and honestly, we really ...Awesome... perfect length and honestly, we really don't need to know more, do we? :D I like your writing!!!Kristin @ Addicted to HEAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14502113713426103508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-6122751278004732832016-04-02T19:34:26.933-07:002016-04-02T19:34:26.933-07:00Ohh... loved this Greg! Am wondering what happens ...Ohh... loved this Greg! Am wondering what happens next!Debbishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06305239848096384084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-4869047234206506012016-04-02T15:41:52.488-07:002016-04-02T15:41:52.488-07:00I like how images can inspire a story....and I enj...I like how images can inspire a story....and I enjoyed reading this one. Now I want to know what happens next!Laurel-Rain Snowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00101090217639410913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-35019671429108565912016-04-02T03:52:57.156-07:002016-04-02T03:52:57.156-07:00Great job! This isn't a genre I would normally...Great job! This isn't a genre I would normally read (futeristic, sci-fi?), but you really had me interested there. Melissa Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14812523745846484847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-73608582472134453382016-04-01T21:27:18.106-07:002016-04-01T21:27:18.106-07:00Thanks Kaja! I have actually thought about it afte...Thanks Kaja! I have actually thought about it after I finished it- I kinda want to know more too. So I might revisit it... glad you liked it. :) Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-34171131705684614382016-04-01T18:44:50.220-07:002016-04-01T18:44:50.220-07:00The story really captures the feeling of the pictu...The story really captures the feeling of the picture--or is it the other way around?<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by Falconer's Library today!Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06296827820807569574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-24639170577849622862016-04-01T00:23:33.192-07:002016-04-01T00:23:33.192-07:00Ah, this is really good! :) I know it's flash ...Ah, this is really good! :) I know it's flash fiction but have you thought about exploring it further? It sounds like a cool beginning of something. I wanna know what their secrets are! Kajahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05543527437659550453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-55299165426499533412016-03-31T17:31:56.317-07:002016-03-31T17:31:56.317-07:00Thanks! I had a lot of fun with it. And it changed...Thanks! I had a lot of fun with it. And it changed a bit as I was writing it. I kinda wanted to explore further what happens next but I thought well flash fiction so I wanted to keep it under a thousand words or so. And I kinda kept it ambiguous about her- IS she having second thoughts? I kinda think so, but we never find out. :) Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-24833823372596343382016-03-31T17:27:39.085-07:002016-03-31T17:27:39.085-07:00Thanks! I had fun writing it. And I agree- the pic...Thanks! I had fun writing it. And I agree- the pic definitely got me thinking what's the story here? Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.com