tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post1654947145113304809..comments2024-03-28T13:32:48.639-07:00Comments on Book Haven : On The Run Greghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-28506489552389253732023-09-30T05:36:45.014-07:002023-09-30T05:36:45.014-07:00Great to see how you danced with this prose and su...Great to see how you danced with this prose and such a great and intense scene! Yes, I felt that I was there. Good going! Like the survival mode in this one. All the best to your creativity!<br /><br><a href="https://caitlinnmegan.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Caitlin&Megan</a><br><a href="https://bonjourivyparker.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Ivy's Closet</a><br><a href="https://elliencompany.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Ellie</a><br><br />elliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15854933369544818739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-22092009788725161562017-10-26T08:11:21.648-07:002017-10-26T08:11:21.648-07:00Sorry Greg. I haven't finished reading these a...Sorry Greg. I haven't finished reading these all yet but I'm just letting you know I haven't forgotten and that I have been reading. :) Di @ Book Reviews by Dihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03021249735871126514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-81919414648443451332017-07-11T07:59:46.540-07:002017-07-11T07:59:46.540-07:00Loving it Greg!Loving it Greg!Kimberly @ Caffeinated Reviewerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15658833731713991138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-72005972570466518562017-06-26T11:06:27.547-07:002017-06-26T11:06:27.547-07:00love the imagery! wow you are GOOD with descriptio...love the imagery! wow you are GOOD with descriptions! The creatures reminded me of one of my latest sci-fi favs Hell Divers those creatures were harpy-like :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03178857439584119475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-73901019628181930432017-06-17T19:54:05.480-07:002017-06-17T19:54:05.480-07:00Hamilton is a time traveler (add to his many skill...Hamilton is a time traveler (add to his many skills). Seriously though Rev America would be an interesting stop. I feel like I have to have them meet now- how can they be apart and I just stop??? And a time less stabby would be good- they need some peace. :) Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-59444443662230987622017-06-17T19:44:41.903-07:002017-06-17T19:44:41.903-07:00THANKS! :D They also must find each other again. I...THANKS! :D They also must find each other again. In... 1778. Revolutionary America. Hamilton helps them reunite. And then they go back to a time less stabby but also less bird-people attck-y. Shannon @ It Starts at Midnighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10043593641190645773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-53024268690677372532017-06-13T14:48:59.613-07:002017-06-13T14:48:59.613-07:00It is risky! I had a condition in mind called Gate...It is risky! I had a condition in mind called Gate- touched- basically multiple trips through Gates are tough on the - and if I ever continue this I may get into that. :) Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-81716533974661771602017-06-13T00:57:14.069-07:002017-06-13T00:57:14.069-07:00Gate jumping? Sounds like risky stuff. Interesting...Gate jumping? Sounds like risky stuff. Interesting place though! And you never read anything about harpies---nice!Kit @ Metaphors and Moonlighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10113986982046115579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-46092777496213186532017-06-12T19:41:38.875-07:002017-06-12T19:41:38.875-07:00Ha ha okay she is his partner, they got separated ...Ha ha okay she is his partner, they got separated and are on the run from... somebody. They go through these gates and end up in other places but also other times. And he is not dead. :) Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-12102276864604980332017-06-12T19:39:35.122-07:002017-06-12T19:39:35.122-07:00Thank you, I may write more as now I even want to ...Thank you, I may write more as now I even want to know more. Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-63054526910303657032017-06-12T19:39:01.952-07:002017-06-12T19:39:01.952-07:00Thanks Sherry! Thanks Sherry! Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-1205004099565567782017-06-12T19:38:51.293-07:002017-06-12T19:38:51.293-07:00Thank you! That means a lot. And I'm glad it m...Thank you! That means a lot. And I'm glad it made sense descriptively. It's a scene I've had in my head for a long time, soI'm glad it came out clear. :) Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-67559975583690432132017-06-12T19:37:22.544-07:002017-06-12T19:37:22.544-07:00Thank you! Thank you! Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-8942999782401779912017-06-12T19:37:11.994-07:002017-06-12T19:37:11.994-07:00Thanks! Thanks! Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-62432095038760769372017-06-12T19:37:02.079-07:002017-06-12T19:37:02.079-07:00Thank you! I appreciate it! The only thing I know ...Thank you! I appreciate it! The only thing I know is they have been running and have gone through multiple gates- but time may be catching up to them. Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-62603428440764771772017-06-12T19:35:10.988-07:002017-06-12T19:35:10.988-07:00It's fun!It's fun! Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515345156687765162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-10266618329527938502017-06-12T19:03:40.328-07:002017-06-12T19:03:40.328-07:00Okay, I have questions! Who is "she"? Wh...Okay, I have questions! Who is "she"? What happened to her? Where the hell is he? WHEN the hell is he? And where did he come from? And is he dead, to be consumed by bird people? Also, really with the bird people? This is really good! Perhaps you should continue it so I can have all the answers! :D Shannon @ It Starts at Midnighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10043593641190645773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-26525106144975783632017-06-12T18:12:08.158-07:002017-06-12T18:12:08.158-07:00I agree with the others who have posted. The setti...I agree with the others who have posted. The setting is fantastic and I'm definitely left wanting to know more. Great writing!Suzanne @ The Bookish Librahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16116292880784513187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-85769900206629174662017-06-12T17:16:51.644-07:002017-06-12T17:16:51.644-07:00Ooo I like.
sherry @ fundinmentalOoo I like.<br />sherry @ <a href="http://www.fundinmental.com/" rel="nofollow"> fundinmental</a> sherry fundinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12197438610372707924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-21157177778531142412017-06-12T16:40:44.372-07:002017-06-12T16:40:44.372-07:00I love this setting! This really reads like a prop...I love this setting! This really reads like a proper novel; your writing is fantastic. I love your descriptions and attention to detail -- you make it super easy to envision what you're writing about; I would've imagined something similar to the images you included even if you hadn't shared them. I'm definitely intrigued and would love to read more about this character and this world. Awesome flash fic! :-) A Belle’s Taleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08018346890745799622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-2757869128982821542017-06-12T10:52:42.376-07:002017-06-12T10:52:42.376-07:00I agree, great setting and writing!I agree, great setting and writing!Kindlemomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09084577342034704304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-68327171170844114072017-06-12T10:47:57.902-07:002017-06-12T10:47:57.902-07:00Nice setting, it feels tense and unpredictable.Nice setting, it feels tense and unpredictable.Trish @ Between My Lineshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08517849083417759188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-4211299321192888382017-06-12T08:33:18.900-07:002017-06-12T08:33:18.900-07:00Okay I LOVE THIS!! and SO intrigued!! Like where i...Okay I LOVE THIS!! and SO intrigued!! Like where is he? what happened? what are the creatures? Why is he running? CAN I HAVE A FULL NOVEL PLEASE? :DUma @Books.Bags.Burgershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10112898986107572612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3952534890282357396.post-82454612271405857042017-06-12T00:40:35.372-07:002017-06-12T00:40:35.372-07:00Nice :D
I used to do flash fic with Carole but ala...Nice :D<br />I used to do flash fic with Carole but alas no timeBlodeueddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435479623560871881noreply@blogger.com